TIME HEART PURPOSE AND STRATEGY

Scenes

Action Scenes

Let the reader know what everybody is generally doing then get back to your main character.

Don't do a blow by blow account.

italic the characters inner mental and emotional states about once a page

Dial down the metephors, but when you do use them, don't be flowery, and use the characters voice to define what metephor they would use.

What is the purpose of the action scene?

What makes an action scene fun?

showing the characters making connections

using resources in interesting ways

being clever

Use alpha readers to see if they get bored or lost.

Relationships

real relationships

guess what the other person is thinking and being wrong

making mistakes for what you thought was a good reason but wasn't

fumbling

reasons to relate

simular interest

complimenting abilities

fun

coencidences, can add to the romance

trying and failing, getting closer but then a wrench gets thrown in

Comedy

Match your humor with the tone of your story

Setup forshadow whats coming following through with what the reader expects then at the last second switcherooed

Jack Oneil Sarcastic

Sarcastic

sarcastic nots

unsure where to go

childish glee

not understanding what geniuses are saying

stoping people from stopping a situation he wants to continue

gets caught up on pronounciations

mistake one word another character uses for another with a funny alternate meaning

getting lost halfway though an explaination and pushing through anyways causing a snowball effect of hilarity

An older person acting like a little kid

Matt Smith Doctor Child

being offended about not being acclaimed

Insecure about himself, bod, mistakes

Making uncool cool

Argueing with himself

fully expressing his fit and then growing up in an instant getting onto others for throwing fits or dillydallying

Arguing that something isn't and suprise what it is when the reader thought the character meant it was something else obviously

His coping mechinism to being insulted for something he wears or dances is to say its cool but your not cool enough to realise it

Mr Bean Physical

Lessons

Heist Scenes

Grab team, teach newby(meaning the others have a repour of doing something on this scale before that is understood, so give them a job in a past life(journal) like this),

explain problems, break into pieces, piece missing, solve piece in novel suprise

compare w italian job, which goes dif, because the target changes throwing out their planning so they have to improvize., but if u make the reader work as hard as the characters and make them loose that work with them, you could just reference the work, or let the characters reapply the preperation to the new problems.